I need help on a thesis. It's on Winston, and how he has external and internal conflicts with himself over the Party.

You are pretty
close to a strong thesis if you just invert your question a little bit. Think about what it is
you want to prove with your essay.

If you are wanting to express that these
external and internal conflict contribute to the overall message thatshares with readers then
state that.

Are you needing to cite literary devices for your...