CAN SOMEONE PLEASE HELP ME WRITE AN INTRODUCTION PARAGRAPH FOR THE ESSAY BELOW PLEASE? College is supposed to be one the best experience of our...

You have
some wonderful specifics in the body of your essay, where you provide concrete details about the
needs of the university.  However, in your introduction, you fall back upon vague generalities
about how college is important.  Apply to strategy to your introduction that you applied to your
body paragraphs.  Rather than telling your audience college is important, include
something...