How can I improve the conclusion of my essay on Romeo and Juliet? Here's what I have: "The tragic ending to the lovers story is not solely a result...

You are almost there.
Your conclusion is very solid. Please make sure your conclusion repeats the main ideas of your
thesis statement and the points you have developed throughout your essay.

All
that is left to you is to leave the reader with a wider thought. You have nicely analyzed the
ways in which many of the adults in 's life have not done what is best for the young lovers and
may have contributed to their deaths. Do you also want to include 's parents in this
paragraph?

Now you need to step back from the specifics of your conclusion
and write about what Shakespeare is saying about adults. The conclusion of your essay should
leave the reader with a wider thought about life. What does Shakespeare think about adults and
their relationship with children? Do adults always act in children's best interest, and why or
why not? The answers to these questions will form the end of your
conclusion.