Thursday, 20 March 2014

I'm writing an essay on how Rahim is a better father then Baba and I can't think of a conclusion -- any suggestions?

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earlier response is correct. We cannot help you with any specific.  Certainly, you need to
restate your thesis, and when I say "restate," I mean say what your main idea is in a
different way.  I have found that some students think that a restatement of the thesis should be
in the exact same words, but that is what you do not want to do!

Of course,
a conclusion, like any other paragraph, must be more than one sentence long.  Therefore, you
need to know what else should or can be included in a conclusion.  You should have a review of
the points you made in your essay.  For example, if I...

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